Research and Planning: Updated FINAL MAGAZINE COVER,CONTENTS & DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

I got the audience feedback and I changed the following things.

FRONT PAGE :

* I made sure there was a small border around the edge of the page so that none of the writing was too close. 

*I made sure that nothing covered my artists face.

*I connected the 'PLUS' to the banner at the bottom of the page.
*I added a website address onto the page.
*I've rearranged the additional pages.

CONTENTS PAGE

*I again made sure there was a gap between the edge and my writing. 

*I tried to make the bottom image larger than what it was so that the image of Claire would be a similar size, but I was unable to do this. 

 DOUBLE PAGE

*I managed to continue the side border down all of the side, so that the grey strip doesn't cut it off, this helps it look neater. 

*I faded the picture of the skull, you can still see it slightly. The reason I did it was because I wanted to still keep that idea of people thinking she's completely different than her true self. And everything on the page contrasts with each other. 

Research and Planning: My Finished Magazine

FINAL TOUCHES:

I have now finished my music magazine front cover, contents page and double paged spread. :)

I have spoken to my teacher and she has given me some feedback. She thinks that I have nearly completed my music magazine but she said on my front cover, that the 'Tied Up In Music' looks like its floating a little so maybe put it a little smaller as though its coming out from behind her head. In addition to that she stated that maybe make the poster of Carey a little bigger.

MY FINISHED MAGAZINE...

Research and Planning: New Ideas

My contents page and double page spread are now complete, I just need to add a couple more things onto my front cover and then I shall be finished. :)