Heyyyy. I really love this Holly. I love your house style and the consistency of it all.
Front cover: I love the masthead - it really suits the style of the magazine. I also really like the simplicity, yet effectiveness of the bar at the bottom
Double page spread: This is AMAZING! I love how you've used photo manipulation to merge the photo with the text, and also the clever use of Sally's surname in the title. The image at the bottom is also very good - it stands out and is effective.
Contents page: I like how you have used the masthead from your front cover at the bottom. I like the pictures, although think they could be arranged in a more organised way. I also like how the box behind the word 'Contents' is slanted.
Overall, your magazine is very good! You should be very proud xD x
Front cover: I think your photograph is very well taken and clearly represents the genre of the magazine, also the colours and font you've used hilighs this. The only thing I can suggest you to add would be a little more detail or a couple of storys to use the space around the image.
Double-Page-Spread: this is yet again a really good layout, the way you have merged the photograph with a background on the next page is very impressive and looks proffesional.
Contents page: This is my favourite, I think the photographs are very well taken and has that 'rock' genre to it. There is nothing id suggest to change on this.
Heyyyy. I really love this Holly. I love your house style and the consistency of it all.
ReplyDeleteFront cover: I love the masthead - it really suits the style of the magazine. I also really like the simplicity, yet effectiveness of the bar at the bottom
Double page spread: This is AMAZING! I love how you've used photo manipulation to merge the photo with the text, and also the clever use of Sally's surname in the title. The image at the bottom is also very good - it stands out and is effective.
Contents page: I like how you have used the masthead from your front cover at the bottom. I like the pictures, although think they could be arranged in a more organised way. I also like how the box behind the word 'Contents' is slanted.
Overall, your magazine is very good! You should be very proud xD x
Front cover: I think your photograph is very well taken and clearly represents the genre of the magazine, also the colours and font you've used hilighs this. The only thing I can suggest you to add would be a little more detail or a couple of storys to use the space around the image.
ReplyDeleteDouble-Page-Spread: this is yet again a really good layout, the way you have merged the photograph with a background on the next page is very impressive and looks proffesional.
Contents page: This is my favourite, I think the photographs are very well taken and has that 'rock' genre to it. There is nothing id suggest to change on this.
:D