Here are updated versions of my magazine. I have changed some of the things around that the examiner said I could improve on. I still need to edit the contents page at the bottom.
I love the image on the front cover really like the eye contact. I love the masthead and how it matches the outfit of the model. I like how the colours have carried on into the content and double page spread. Hope this has helped :)
Contents page: I think your contents page background is really effect and looks really good.I really like your pictures and the border you have used to make them stand out. The only thing I would suggest would be to put something in the left hand corner. Maybe an editors message. Two page spread: I think your two page spread is layout is cool. I'm a bit confused about the picture though I feel it doesn't go well with the picture on the front. Front page: I think the front page looks really professional, I think less is more and it looks really effective :)
I love the image on the front cover really like the eye contact. I love the masthead and how it matches the outfit of the model. I like how the colours have carried on into the content and double page spread. Hope this has helped :)
ReplyDeleteContents page:
ReplyDeleteI think your contents page background is really effect and looks really good.I really like your pictures and the border you have used to make them stand out. The only thing I would suggest would be to put something in the left hand corner. Maybe an editors message.
Two page spread:
I think your two page spread is layout is cool. I'm a bit confused about the picture though I feel it doesn't go well with the picture on the front.
Front page:
I think the front page looks really professional, I think less is more and it looks really effective
:)